BEFORE	AFTER
My scientist always wears a white coat to protect himself. He's a hard worker and is devoted to his work. . . . He enjoys his work. He really doesn't take it as work; he calls it his hobby because he would not want to be doing anything else.	. . . most of the scientists were in jeans and striped shirts. I even saw a person with a Bulls shirt on. . . . (Scientists are) interesting, smart people who dedicated their lives to what they like with many other lively endeavors, like kids or marriage.
Kyle